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Post by Bambi on Jan 9, 2008 16:09:23 GMT -5
I write a lot of poetry, not so much lately as I have in the past. Anyway, I started writing this poem that I haven't titled yet amlost 10 months ago, and it's still not finished, but to get the threads rolling, I figured I would share it. It's actually not as dark as most of my poems, which is surprising because I was going through a breakup from a serious relationship. Anyway, here it is, so far at least...
Did you think I would just sit around and cry? did you think I would wait for you until the day I die? You would not go the extra mile, And I refused to be just a girl with a title. I don't blame myself, but I don't blame you either; I'm not going to label you as a cheater. I thought you loved me, and that you really cared; I'm going to miss all the time we've shared.
Anyway, it's what I've got, and I don't think it will ever be finished really.
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Post by ::)(:Admin:)(:: on Jan 9, 2008 16:15:47 GMT -5
Thats really good! I think you should think about finishing it. It could be real deep and many people could relate.
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